So for the past several days, I've worked all day until about 12:30 am, only to get up at noon and leave soon after for my next shift...today I worked only four hours, and now I'm home...





I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO D:!!!
LOL I'm so bored now, I almost want to go back XD;;;

Au Revoir~


CLUBS

Sorry it's so late guys, studying for the SAT on a tight schedule really eats up your time and energy DX




Creativity: 5/5
What a predicament! Cyril and Lawrence switching bodies! If I may, bloody brilliant~


Originality: 4.5/5
With the new plot you've created through this entry, you've utilized a lot of originality, and created something that can play out
no matter what situation you may be thrown into next. I think it's refreshing to include your opponents in your future endeavors, rather
than perform and instant kill/KO and then leave them behind. I'm absolutely mollified to see this <3


Characterization: 4.5/5
Wonderful use of characterization


Story: 5/5
The story is delightful, with silly remarks bound to make you giggle. Bright and colorful, the entry is aesthetically pleasing and easy to understand.
The story keeps you spellbound, and the cliffhanging climactic ending of the entry leaves the reader itching for more.

19/20




Creativity: 4/5
With your own plots blossoming in the entry, it adds that unique touch and makes the story more intriguing. Great job. Also, nice Gurren Lagann reference ;D


Originality: 5/5
This section also goes somewhat with the previous, nice use of your own plot, and you have a lovely style going on with the use of different patterns tones.


Characterization: 4/5
You did a fair job of keeping the characters in character, and let their personalities shine through. "Did his balls drop or something?" xD; Nice job!


Story: 3.5/5
For me, the story was hard to follow. I re-read it several times, yet kept finding myself lost. To clear up these inconsistencies, I would advise to provide a
brief explanation of what's happening in instances when the story encounters a sudden transition, or to work on improving your storytelling abilities
to do that for you, and clear up any confusion that may occur.

16.5/20


And so the winner is:
Congratulations, and good luck in the final arena!
Good job, both of you, for all your hard work!

Au Revoir~


CLUBS

INTERNET CONNECTIVITYYYYYYYY!!!!

*/hiatus now ends*

Au Revoir~


CLUBS

Okay, so I have a quick question for all you lovely watchers. Were I to say, oh I don't know, offer commissions, who would be interested? My computer's back up and running, excusing the fact that I can't seem to access the internet from it, but I can however use my illustration programs. I've been pondering whether or not I should offer them, so I felt I'd ask you all! I'd probably offer anything from sketches to full CGs with anything goes for content (excluding mecha) and the highest price for a single full CG would be about $20 I would think. As for method of payment, I would prefer paypal, but may offer additional methods at the disgression of my parents. So now, under these circumstances, who would be interested?

Au Revoir~


CLUBS